For today's writing task we had a free write and we can do anything but I just got a story stared.
The Rise Of The Water
Water started to flood high as clouds only the highest would stand but this story is about this 11 year old that was poor his family and lived on the ground but this is be for the storm hit.
‘’Hey Jack!’’ Said Jack's friend. ‘’Yeah oh wait never mind I thought I heard something’’
But he did, ‘’ Do you want to go and ride our bikes down the hill come on it will be fun!’’
Said Jack's friend. ‘’Yeah sure’’ they got on
there bikes and slowly the went the hill Jacks friend he also heard something as well as Jack but the went on down to the beach it was going to be night soon so they headed back as the sun setted
Dark clouds flooded the sky, rain lighting came, it was all on tv but Jack
had no tv he had no idea what was coming his friend came to warn him ‘’Jack! Get your family we gotta get out on high ground we gotted to move.
Jack's family and his friend's family got to high ground. All of the buildings were locked. The wet water was rising higher and higher. Both of their families went off but Jack and his friend stayed. They looked for some places to climb ‘’A tree? Mabey’’ Says Jack. ‘’We won't all fit up there.’’ Said His friend. They came to the conclusion that… they might be gone. ‘’We have to do something, come on’’ Said Jack. ‘’We can't do anything, waves are coming in there like the size of a house. The rain is starting to really hurt.
‘’It's over, let's go find them’’ said Jack's friend.
TO BE CONTINUED
What Did I Do Good On? I Did Well describing about our task
What improve on I could improve on? describing the character more
What Did I Enjoy? describing about the task