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Monday 6 September 2021

The Strange Town

For Today's Task We Had We Had To Write About a Strange town I found this very interesting  to write about but I found it fun!

    

   The Strange Town

It’s time and go to the strange town ‘’Hey um are you sure about this thing we are just kids many people have died there so are you sure’’

‘’Yeah we are just kids maybe we should let the adults do it’’

Na let’s just go and do it ‘’FINE’’ Let’s go As their journey continued they set off for an epic quest to rule the Strange Town! 



As tumbleweeds floated through the air and dust covered the ground like a blanket. The way there will take 24 hours to walk but on a horse will help a lot but there were no horses on site which is a problem but it’s still possible to walk so they did. 5 hours in the water is getting a bit low but shoude be fine 

15 hours in but there all out there going to have to find a well or some think fresh water will do ‘’EVERYONE LOOK A TINY TOWN AND WATER’’ ‘’He is not lying guys there is a little town wait there is horses to but there not going to be for free that's why we are going to steal them!’’ ‘’What are you insane’’ maybe Not come on get on them 



They have only 10 hours left, let's do this! ‘’Come on, team, make your horses run FAST! 8 hours 6 hours 4 hours 2 hours and they have made it, ‘’YES WE DID IT why are you guys not celebrating?’’ ‘’We all of us are so tired can we please have some sleep?’’ ‘’Haha of course you can but in the morning we got to go and explore this weird and wonderful place!’’ Sure yeah wonderful people died here and it is all because of people who really wanted to find out what the place really is... ‘’Come on let’s get some sleep.’’

‘’Hey guys it’s the morning guys? Where are you all um Guys! Maybe this place is really haunted o no AH HELP!


       

What Did I Do Good On? I Did Well describing about our task

What improve on I could improve on? describing the character more

What Did I Enjoy? describing about the task


1 comment:

  1. Hi Rusty,
    Great blog post rusty.
    Next time remember to add a question to get the reader thinking. Also make sure you re-read so you can fix any mistakes. Good Job! Well Done!

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