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For last week we had to make a descriptive sentence about a crying baby and a close up of an elephants eye.
This task we had to write about an elephant and a crying baby. When we have got our little photos and glued it into our writing book then we had to write two descriptive sentences, for the crying baby and the elephant. For example: this crying baby head looks like a fire ball! So it does not need to be long, it just needs to be descriptive.
What is your favourite part? My favourite part was writing the elephant task.
What did you enjoy the most? Saying that the baby's head looks like a fire ball.
What could you improve on? Making it more descriptive
Hi Rusty good post. you could have put more descriptive words and more information
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