i enjoyed this task very much it was fun making it.
my favourite part was when Jacob fell in to the water you will see that part in the summary.
the author could improve bye making it more inserting.
they can improve there text bye making it a lot longer for the good readers.
that's a very interesting Rusty. I like how you've described it and put lots of detail into it. make sure to keep up the good work. Can't wait to see more of it.
ReplyDeletehey rusty nice story i like the part when Jacob fell into the water it was so funny i like how you put some details in your work i think you did a good summery i want to Know how long this took you to do? its pretty cool.
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