Hi Rusty, I am Ethan a year 6 student from Waikowhai Primary School. I really enjoyed reading your writing. I liked how he noticed it was a volcano by hearing SIZZLE. Maybe next you should check you writing before you publish, what was your favorite part?. Blog ya later!
Hi Rusty, I am Ethan a year 6 student from Waikowhai Primary School. I really enjoyed reading your writing. I liked how he noticed it was a volcano by hearing SIZZLE. Maybe next you should check you writing before you publish, what was your favorite part?. Blog ya later!
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