For today's writing task we had a free write and we can do anything but I just got a story stared.

  The Rise Of The Water

Water started to flood high as clouds only the highest would stand but this story is about this 11 year old that was poor his family and lived on the ground but this is be for the storm hit.

‘’Hey Jack!’’ Said Jack's friend. ‘’Yeah oh wait never mind I thought I heard something’’

But he did, ‘’ Do you want to go and ride our bikes down the hill come on it will be fun!’’

Said Jack's friend. ‘’Yeah sure’’ they got on 

there bikes and slowly the went the hill Jacks friend he also heard something as well as Jack but the went on down to the beach it was going to be night soon so they headed back as the sun setted

Dark clouds flooded the sky, rain lighting came, it was all on tv but Jack 

had no tv he had no idea what was coming his friend came to warn him ‘’Jack! Get your family we gotta get out on high ground we gotted to move.

Jack's family and his friend's family got to high ground. All of the buildings were locked. The wet water was rising higher and higher. Both of their families went off but Jack and his friend stayed. They looked for some places to climb ‘’A tree? Mabey’’ Says Jack. ‘’We won't all fit up there.’’ Said His friend. They came to the conclusion that… they might be gone. ‘’We have to do something, come on’’ Said Jack. ‘’We can't do anything, waves are coming in there like the size of a house. The rain is starting to really hurt.

‘’It's over, let's go find them’’ said Jack's friend. 

TO BE CONTINUED

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Reading Task

 For this weeks reading task we had to make a diary about any story

Dear Diary

It was a school trip we were all getting hyped up to go and explore the forest 

It was only year 7’s that went 

on the trip and I was one But there was one new kid that came just befor the trip so when we were about to get on the bus just a remind this kid is like twice the size of me and he look a bit mean anyway he just like pushed me like push push me right out of the way at the back of the line so I was not that sure about him?

I Sat at the middle being funny trying to be the class clown. We were still getting loaded on and the kid just stat next to me, and he just gave me a menacing look it looked like he had lighting in his eyes like super man and I thought he was going to shot beams out of his eyes yeah so I stopped talking.

It was very loud on the bus and I can tell that he was getting very angry he made his and into a fist and did a little punch on the seat and I was getting very nerves.

We all got of the bus and we were told to get into pears of to and right when I was going to chose my friend but the kid he said ‘’I Chose Eren’’ so yeah I dont no what to do now. 

To Be Continued

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What improve on I could improve on? describing the character more

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My Week Holiday

For This weeks online learning we had to write about our holiday  

         My Two Week Holiday

For my two week holiday It was just me and my family for most of it so it was Boring *sigh* Anyways! We got our motorbikes 

running up and ready to speed of through the tracks of our farm Jumping over rocks and stumps and racing my brother Case, I love riding them and alwase beating my brother

‘’YEAH BECAUSE U HAVE THE BIGGER AND BETTER BIKE THAN ME!’’ Says Case My Brother. Ha Sure....

But after like a week and a half of riding our motorbikes we got a bit bored so every weekend we got to go on our chrome book so that was fun.

I also wanted to earn some money so I wanted to help out on the farm so I helped with milking it takes like 3 hours and I do it every day and earn 10  Bucks so I am happy with that also I can do another job get weeds of our farm and every massive bag we fill we get 5 bucks and it takes 20 minutes to do it so I can earn way my money but it is so boring and I don't like it but I like milking because it is fun for me.

On the last day Case my brother is getting really excited for his birthday he has been playing the piano so much so loud and to much he is playing happy birthday right now well I am writing this. ‘’Will You Shh!’’ Said Rusty.

So that was  My Two week Holiday I Hoped you liked it :)

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